Finalize thesis report and fix grammar mistakes

Signed-off-by: Severin Kaderli <severin@kaderli.dev>

documentation/thesis/content/07_benchmarking.tex

@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ The following benchmarks were run with 25\% CPU utilization. The tool \texttt{st
 \subsection{Results}
 As one can see in the benchmarks, the most successful configuration was running MagSend with \SI{1}{\bit\per\second} at with an idle CPU followed by \SI{0.5}{\bit\per\second} at an idle CPU.
 
-The benchmarks with 25\% CPU load were mostly failing, with some few ones being able to detect the preamble and one even being able to receive the payload length from the message. There might be a few reasons why the results are like this. The first one is thermal throttling. CPUs produce a lot of heat when under load and thus they get hotter. When they get to hot, they throttle by reducing clock speeds. This process is designed to protect the CPU from overheating \cite{thermalThrottling}.
+The benchmarks with 25\% CPU load were mostly failing, with some few ones being able to detect the preamble and one even being able to receive the payload length from the message. There might be a few reasons why the results are like this. The first one is thermal throttling (see \autoref{section:thermal_throttling}).
 
 The laptop that was used for running the benchmarks, already reaches CPU temperatures of over \SI{90}{\celsius} when only running at around 25\% CPU load (see \autoref{figure:cpu_temperatures}).
 
@@ -78,12 +78,4 @@ The laptop that was used for running the benchmarks, already reaches CPU tempera
     \label{figure:cpu_temperatures}
 \end{figure}
 
-When MagSend then attempts to sent data by putting even more stress on the CPU, the CPU begins to throttle and the resulting CPU loads gets dampened (see \autoref{figure:throttle}). While longer spikes like the preamble at the start of the packet are still visible, the rest of the message is only noise and really be received.
-
-\begin{figure}[H]
-    \fbox{\includegraphics[width=1\textwidth]{benchmarking/1bps_25.png}}
-    \caption{CPU temperatures under 25\% CPU load}
-    \label{figure:throttle}
-\end{figure}
-
 The other problem with the failing benchmarks is on the receiving side. The interval at which the sensor provides data to the application is not guaranteed and thus introduces some jitter \cite{androidSensorMonitor}.